Very beautiful, expressively and sad

sounds like a break up song

if i could rap i would say something like.....

we break up
and then make up
with tears and washed make up
now our faits up
up in the air
to fall anywhere
with no dispair
no repair
jus a tear in my heart
we shared a start
now we're here to part
away from one another
couldn't have done another
spinin in circles
it's hurtful
to go from blue to purple
old memories of how we were
and how we occured
now lost like tears in the rain
i know its hard to hear again
broken promises of love forever
and endevour to be together
i wish we could go back to the beginin
and never reach the endin
how could it be so hard
to break someones heart
with silent disputes
why can't we go back to bein jus cute
i remember when your colone use to taunt me
now every memory jus haunts me
these things are never easy
when the lost love will jus tease me

Yeah.....

This hip hop is pretty nice, 5/5 for you woot.

nice dude

This a nice Hiphop, dude!
I enjoy all off your tracks!
Peace Bro
Dont forget to review my songs :P

5/5 By silent-hunter, from 3,88 to 4 ^^

Whoa!

This is some good quality stuff right here mang. :D I'm thoroughly impressed. :D Nothing I could really poke at that was exceptionally bad. It was really good. :P

Piano really pulled this track together, I loved it. The beat was solid and you had some decent basslines. High strings were a great touch as well. Like others have said already, it's short. Then again, most beats tend to repeat themselves anyway, right? If this had a brilliant mc and a nice female chorus, it'd be bangin for sure.

Overall, it's nice. My friends would dig this as much as I. ;) 4/5