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Author Comments
A rough finished demo of a song I'm working on. This is probably the best I can do quality wise to be honest, I'm not the best producer, and I'm lazy.
(Lyrics)
When was the last time, that I've seen you?
Back then...when can I see you again?
What day is it? I'm losing track.
What can I say? Oh wait it's Tuesday...
(On a Tuesday, see you on Tuesday)
Remember the last time that we went for a walk?
We had a talk, it was pretty good. Well we should...
Will we do it again? If so then when?
On a Tuesday...
(On a Tuesday, it's on a Tuesday)
(On a Tuesday, and that's today)
I waited all day long, and you never came
But the fear in my brain, I think I've kept it tame
If I wait here again, and you never appear.
Then I'll let you know, I'll be waiting here...
(I'm waiting every year)
(I'll be right here...)
Jay responds:
I'll see what I can do, thanks xP
i luved it ^_^ keep it up
Jay responds:
Thanks a lot :D
i love this song... would love to hear more from you in this vein... deep and emotionally charged, perfect recipe for a hit! keep up the great work 8)...
Jay responds:
That's great to hear, I was hoping that I wasn't the only one imagining hearing something like this on the radio. Guess that means it's time to work on more :D
Aside from everything that has been said already this is a great song you have here! I like how it builds at the end too. Keep up the good work :D
Jay responds:
Wow, I'm really surprised at how many reviews I'm getting, and even more on how well it's being received. Thanks, this really encourages me to make more!
i think this song just needs an upgrade. you need more experience with the program i think. i like the concept but i dont feel it was exacuted properly
Jay responds:
I agree, I either need to get better at mixing or find someone to mix for me. Thanks for the review.
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