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A rough finished demo of a song I'm working on. This is probably the best I can do quality wise to be honest, I'm not the best producer, and I'm lazy.
When was the last time, that I've seen you?
Back then...when can I see you again?
What day is it? I'm losing track.
What can I say? Oh wait it's Tuesday...
(On a Tuesday, see you on Tuesday)
Remember the last time that we went for a walk?
We had a talk, it was pretty good. Well we should...
Will we do it again? If so then when?
On a Tuesday...
(On a Tuesday, it's on a Tuesday)
(On a Tuesday, and that's today)
I waited all day long, and you never came
But the fear in my brain, I think I've kept it tame
If I wait here again, and you never appear.
Then I'll let you know, I'll be waiting here...
(I'm waiting every year)
(I'll be right here...)
I liked your song, I can Imagine how it would come if you had a better Synth.
I also liked the lyrics and that wicked effect you used on your voice, though I think that you could do better on the singing, there were parts where you could be a bit more energetic you know? like.. if you where feeling really hurt by recalling the pain of the moment on certain parts of the song.
Anyway, overall, it's a nice song. Keep it up!
Yeah I agree, certain parts of the song could use some redo on the vocals. Maybe I'll fix it up someday. But thanks a lot for the feedback. I really appreciate it.
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it
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