Well, to begin with, Dearly Beloved doesn't seem to go TOO well with DnB, but that's not an issue here. Personally, I think the beginning and end are very strange. They sound like something that would've came from a more traditional follow-up, but they also sound very rigid and forced, which kinda detracted from the song. Funnily enough, the DnB portion wasn't so bad, I think you did a respectable job on that. Good effort nonetheless.