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Fav SJD to get the new stuff first!
I think it might just be that I dislike all songs like this, but I just felt that this was crap, the vocals were unclear and the actual song behind them was rather repetetive.
Fantastic song, loved the ending. But like Zigzag said, might wanna leave the stuff that could offend your fanbase. I'm an atheist, but I know people that would throw you off a building for saying that. But yeah. Awesome song.
Thanks, man. I PMd u!
Hmm, I know that you said you were going to be "yourself" at the end, but to be honest I preferred the rest of the song. Your bass wasn't mixed as well into the song as the rest of it. It didn't pack enough impact, but I don't know how to do it, it just felt like... the mids were gone or something? I haven't figured it out myself but it lacks that... punch (without making it too abrasive on the ears I guess).
But yeah. Your rapping is on point bro. And the girl's voice was pretty hard-out amazing too. Sounded like Nicki Minaj (don't think you'll like her but anyway)
But you know what I mean, right? Sometimes you gotta make that music that the girls like, to get the girls? I don't know, I only see girls about 1.5 times a week. But yeah.
Apart from the F*** Jesus part (I'm Christian), this was pretty pro. I'd go soft on the religious slang coz you don't know who you might offend in your fanbase. COZ U HAZ 1.
Thanks man. I do my best. I PMd u!
OMNIPONY, ENOUGH SAID
I know right?
Love the track but the vocal track needs more polish.
What, polish like a boot or a loafer? Wish you had been more specific.
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