Score: 7
"Alright..."
date: April 29, 2006
An interesting theory you've got here. What if aliens did have a rock band? Well, first of all, it would be under general rock instead of Drum and Bass. Second, it would be more intense, and third, it would have more instrumentation.
The main melody is very pleasing, and it's also a nifty tune. Mix that with some horrible drum sounds, and no current variation and no other instruments, and you have a tune that will catch somebodies attention, then have their attention decrease, little by little. The drum sound you have is good for the beginning and the guitar you have for the beginning are nice, but they need to eventually transfer into a hard rock guitar, something intense. It can't sound like a banjo on the guitar the whole time (but if you mixed it with some hardcore guitar it might be nicer). And the drums need to sound real after a while, that continuation is suicidal to the effect that you'd want you're song to have.
Think about it. Would you want to hear a song that seems the same the whole time, or would you rather it have some other spices, chill and thrills, and other spectacular showing in it? What you've got is a good, solid piece that repeats itself. It's like the song doesn't know what else is out there to offer for itself. It can only say what it knows, it doesn't have imagination, and can only be factual. Try puting some other wacky instruments in there. It would be a nice change from just guitar and drums.
Really, this song has lots of potential, and I can see what you can do with it. I could imagine the beginning part just as an intro, and then some hardcore playing this like it should, and all the aliens using the "rock-on" sign, seriously, this could be awesome. Just keep working at it, find programs that offer some great drums sounds, mettle with counter-melodies, and bass parts, and you'll be on you're way!
-SuperDrummer146
Author's Response:
I am very thankful for your review. Yeah I dont have a program... I used my petal which had a synth and a metronome drum beat. So I couldnt really change much. I really do wish I had some program. But for now at this moment... My music can only go so far. But thank you for your help. I will look into what I can do :-D. Thanks