This is actualy realy good

Gotta hook all that up to the preamp but yes, very very nice riffs in here. Liking it!

I agree with thecoreman. Even if you don't have the best recording equipment, you can still EQ the various tracks: what would help the track the most is making a cut somewhere between 2 and 4 kHz (wherever the sound is most grating). A bassline would also give a foundation to the track. Although, given the way the track is right now, it could make good elevator music. I mean, it's a tad fast for elevator music, but it could fill that niche. Keep experimenting, and soon you'll strike gold.

Cool and fun track! Really does have a cheery sound to it.

The Mix is really painful, though. Sound-wise, you have to EQ the whole track so it's a bit more mellow and less painful to listen to. Try to listen to it on the best speakers you can find (a car's speakers are also a good way to try and find out where you went wrong in the mix). Perhaps fill the low end with some bass to even out the whole track.

A good start, but still needs some polishing in my opinion.

This is awesome it is my fave