Nice
I really enjoyed the strings in this one!
The flanged percussion part after was nice, it really felt like something ominous was coming.
I think when the beat and bass comes back after that it needs to be harder. It felt like you were holding back the kick and the bass in the song. If there was a time to unleash them, it was at that point.
Great filtered pulse sound at the start, but just overall, I think the kick needs some more strength, and the bass is cool, but not cutting enough. TS-404 acid maybe would do the trick. Cool slides, distortion, you know how it goes.
I guess it depends on your aim for the song though, maybe you don't want it to be 'in your face'. In which case, ignore my review!
Stay cool.