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Alright, I posted this cause I thought I made good songs and all, yeah...
And I wanted to hear your opinions! It's okay if you don't like it, cause you can just leave.
...Sounded kinda mean...
Shall I put "no offense" in there?
Do you want to here peoples opinions or do you want to be praised? To ask for opinions and then ask people who don't like it to leave is a little contradictory and i don't think it's a good way to improve as an artist. I really didn't like the drums, they sounded very bland, didn't really sit in the mix and the beat was repetitive and dull. That said i did like the other synths sounds and the melodies produced a strange sort of mood that was enjoyable to listen to. I suppose i'm not really into this genre as i found the repeated motifs tedious and felt the song really lacked progression. The slight pitch bend on the synths gave the song a characteristic feel but other than that it all felt a little over done. After 2 mins of the song it felt like you'd revealed all you had to offer and then just fed the listener minor variations on the themes you'd already established. In conclusion poor structure and drums but decent melodies and synths.
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