this one is FAR from finished

the sequence of the beat samples is the way to go, it's how the samples come out, what's the problem. I can't hear that you made a definite choice on which way you wanted to go with this track. Do you want something with a lot of punch in it, or something more subtle, or do you take the trickier part of trying to get both?

Furthermore, there doesn't happen a lot in this track. It sounds like there are only around 4 loops, and as they are, they just sound too weak to entertain. Not alone, and not together. 2/10 and 1/5