Mainly - you need to work on some more melodies - this one is long and repetitive. Also the piece lacks some powerful energy - maybe u should add this in Ambient.
Author Comments
Nice one. (Demo)
CloudArchitect responds:
You're right, it is unfinished stuff to be honest, should have finished it first. The next thing on the agenda was to shorten the first half to 2 repeats of the verse or find something to fill the second 2 repeats of the verse before the 3 minute mark before you mentioned it. I think the energy depends on how loudly you play it, cheers for your feedback! x
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- 6 min 1 sec
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