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So here is the track I've been working on for the past months :)
I really hope you enjoy this one I put a lot of effort into it !
Please, if you don't like it - leave feedback!
I love feedback it helps me improve!
Thanks guys I love you :)
I liked all the detail you put in the song. You definitely spend a lot more time on your songs than I do. I loved that wave splashing sound in the beginning, can you please tell me how you did it? At 1:07 when the bells came in, I did not like the hi hats you put on top of it, it was very unnecessary. The bassline you used is very common and not unique at all. I used to use it all the time actually, but now I stopped. I think this song needed a few sweep effects in some places. I thought your bass notes were too high, but if the bass instrument you used doesn't sound right on the lower notes, then it's fine.
hi thanks a lot for the review :)
Yeah I pride myself with spending a lot of time doing small things on the songs. The wave splashing sound is actually a sound effect I downloaded off a video on youtube (search: rainymood) lol it's really easy. I agree those hi-hats add extra high frequencies which just makes it sound bad. Also with the bassline thing I lack experience in music theory thus the unoriginal bassline, something I have to work on. I actually have a lot of sweeps in this song though, but yeah a few moments needed that listening to it again.. also I actually like the fact that the bass notes are an octave higher lol :))
again, thanks for the review!
Okay I like the beats and the melody, but the first 1 minute or so was a bit too slow of a transition. Like it felt a bit too repetitive if you know what i mean. Once you got To the 1:12 Point, it started to transition much faster and it sounded amazing.
Yeah it starts off really slow; something I'd have to change later in a possible future edit!
I'm glad you liked the rest though, and thanks for the review!! :)
most dreams are forgotten, but this piece will bring dreams I will never soon forget.(p.s., can you make a piano score up for sale somewhere, otherwise, Im gonna make one, if its OK with you) thank you in advance, and keep on dreaming music like this, I cant wait for more!
Yes, of course you can make one!
Thanks a lot for your review, there's a lot coming, trust me :D
Amazing, I saw a dream last night and wanted to make a story out of it! This song inspirited me
I'd like to see the story if possible :P
I loved the ambiance and lovely pluck sounds, wonderful song!
Thank you!! :)
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