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One of my first serious songs that I wrote.
I appreciate the listen.
Update: June 13, 2012 - Re-recorded the verse.
Great track, nice job. Only improvement could be the quality, but other than that, dope bro.
Yeah, that was poor EQing on my part. This was one of my first songs, so I wasn't that great at mixing vocals (not that I am now or anything).
But thanks for listening, Emergency!
Yeah man I liked the beat and the words that you produced in this song. I reckon a bit more enthusimasm in your voice next time would make it better. However, I cant really judge because I havnt released my songs yet. But overall good job!
Thanks for the review, fellow wolf!
This was one of my earliest songs, so I was still new behind the mic at that point (still am, I say). Maybe you'll enjoy my recent stuff even more.
Thanks again for the review!
Love the sample at :33 (or whatever the instrument is). The piano's great. The drums sound pretty good, but something bugs me about the snare. Part of it sounds crunchy, but I keep hearing this water bottle quality to it. You might be able to tweak the EQ around 250 Hz to fix that. And at 1:47, a similar problem with the hat/snare thing - around 3 kHz, there's definitely something you can suck out. If you listen to that sound enough, you'll know what I mean - there's this pang to it that'll give you a headache after a while. Like I said, attenuate somewhere around 3kHz, it'll fix that completely. Otherwise, nicely done. The kick sounds fucking fantastic. Your voice sounds good, mixed well. I dig the bassline. Nice work.
Hah, yeah, I like the guitar at 0:33, too.
I've re-recorded the verse, so I was planning to upload the song again. Before I do that, I'll be sure to take your suggestions and improve the instrumental. I meant to give the drums a lo-fi-like sound at 1:47, but I didn't mean to make it a bother to listen to, you know? So I'll be sure to address that.
I appreciate the critique, thanks for that!
I appreciate so much the instrumental used.
Thank you for giving me a listen!
I was a bit hesitant to upload this beat because I felt like the beat wasn't as good as I actually thought it was, so it's good to know you liked it.
I just finished my semester at school, so I plan to record more songs soon. Be sure to stay tuned! :)
I love the beat. The vocals somewhat seemed to lack enthusiasm, but maybe that's just your style. Good lyrics too. Great song overall. Keep up the good work man.
Thank you VERY for your review, Jack.
I appreciate the listen, and I'm glad you enjoyed the beat and lyrics. It's reassuring to know that I'm doing -something- right.
I do hope you'll be able to enjoy my future work as much (or more, even) as this.
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