then that would remove what I was getting at in this song. Sorry, but adding those things would kind of kill its mellow-side. My mistake- it was either tagging it as trance or ambient. Wasn't sure which one would fit more.

Thanks for the comment either way! I just don't see those things fitting for this version of the song, however.

Second comment in one night? Huh... But yeah, after some harsh crit, I had to teach myself be less repetitive, or be repetitive properly- as well as save some instruments for last. That's obviously working, even if some of my more favorite pieces get a small bit. But thanks for the comment. I'm trying hard, and I already knew this was one of my best songs, even if it isn't much. Gifts seem to work out better than anything else, so maybe I should do more of those!

Usually my gifts are better than my actual spur of the moment music, or project music. I just seem to work harder when I gift or collaborate is all. I had another version to this, and it was worse ;-; anyways, thanks for the comment! And i'll be sure to keep on tryin' to improve.