Not bad, not bad. This was really good. I've heard better, but this was still great.
Good job!
CLABTRAP Competition 2012 - MC Knock Out
Pre-Round: Jakobe vs KlazikNadi
Beat by JayNyce
Verse 1 - Jakobe
Verse 2 - KlazikNadi
Verse 3 -Jakobe
Verse 4 - KlazikNadi
For more comp info check out CLABTRAP.com or bigred.newgrounds.com
Decide on the winner of the battle in a review below.
Not bad, not bad. This was really good. I've heard better, but this was still great.
Good job!
You Both did great... Ultimately , the "only time iim slipping is inside of your mom to give her a respectable son' (not exact) Killed it. That was fresh. FRESH I SAY!
verse 1 - More gay disses, works on redoing a name.
verse 2 - Starts with a gay dis, get a Tom Sawyer job, gives him a new nickname.
verse 3 - Less gay disses, does better.
verse 4 - Fucks mom, fat wowtard dis.
Vote goes to Jakobe.
jak: 1 point (2 good disses, 1 bad diss)
nazi: 2 points (2 good disses)
jak: 0 points (1 good diss, good diss, filler)
nazi: -2 (1 good diss, long prewritten)
1 to 0....being within 3 points of each other requires a tiebreak in my scoring system.
Tiebreak is multies/internal in good disses....of which you guys had zero.
Draw,
I can't respect anyone who discredits lyrics just because they're "big words". In hip-hop, words are ammunition, and you need all you can get. In addition, although I like the whispered delivery, Klazik's flow sounded really messy, and his comebacks were weak. The "rhyming dictionary" line, like I just said, comes off as insecure and defensive rather than biting or confident. Not to mention various generic mom insults.
Jakobe on the other hand sounds like he needs a new mike. Unless that's intentionally part of his style. His first verse is decent (still better than Klazik's), but in his second he really steps it up in terms of lyricism and flow and cements his victory.
He put it perfectly at the beginning of his second verse:
"...what?"
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