First: The beginning it needs a little work just make it so the sound flows together and not all jumbled around.
Second: I like the way it transitions from a jumbled mess to a solid beat and fyi im not bein a dick and im not hatin i just think it needs a little work thats all
+ReachFreak+
Author Comments
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ShawneeSky responds:
Ahaha, i wanted the beginning to be offtime, odd, no set standards
Spacey, and Chillax for all the smokers to toast to :)
its no big man, if anything i appreciate critique, but most of all im just gonna keep doin me :)
Credits & Info
- Listens
- 587
- Downloads
- 29
- Score
- Waiting for 2 more votes
- Uploaded
- Mar 14, 2012
- 9:43 PM EDT
- Genre
- Hip Hop - Modern
- File Info
- Song
- 11.8 MB
- 5 min 9 sec
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