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I made this when I was high. I like the dreamy shit. Arpeggios and slow stars. Enjoy and ask if you wish to rap to it or something. Comments are appreciated, criticism is also appreciated.
nice beat dude, I would throw in some syncopated snare at :30 to mix it up, the complete loss of drums sounds out of place in this song. You should also mix it up, or give some sort of build or bridge earlier on, it seems as if you lost ideas at 1:30, and the transition at 2:00 is very boring considering how long it takes to get there.
thanks man, this was probably the first beat i ever made, just using the basic stuff. Not made out to be anything decent really just experimental haha. but thanks for the review brotha i appreciate it.
Thanks man. Rap to it! hahaha If you want to i can send you the flp
Hey there guy! I saw your review on my song Revelations so i decided to come check out some of your stuff. First off I love those chords you've got goin', really catchy melody. :) Of course it's catchy, it's in Mixolydean mode. :P Only think about the melody is that on one of the chords I think your sub is playing the wrong notes, although I might be wrong. Anyway, I can easily hear those FL samples, try to get some vengeance packs to broaden up your sample options. Basically load up on VST as well as Izotop Ozone, it's a mastering VST that'll make any song sound amazing, although it's a tad complex. You got talent, all you need now is a bit of theory to help you out on your melodies and some good sounds to compliment that talent. :)
Good luck with music! :D
3.5/5 (7/10) stars, 4/5 vote
Thanks man! This was probably one of the first/most basic songs i did. My more recent ones are definitely better and well created. Where would you suggest i get sound packs at? I have no idea where to get them and i've scoured the internet for some already but had no luck. Message me if you wish to help, I appreciate the score though buddy.
This is pretty dope. However, I don't think your drums has enough bass in it. Because it doesn't boom when I listen to it. But I think if you put a little more bass, it will balance out all the high notes you have in there. Sounds like you use FL Studio, am I right?
Yup, FL8. I'm still noob at it though, some people make jams and like masterpieces off rip. I'm still learning however. But I honestly don't know how to make the bass boom... except for using the sub bass and a couple 3x Osc layers so that it has a note to it cause the sub base is just a boom, doesn't let me give it a note so I can manipulate the sound. But thanks for the comment and i'll work on it some more. And if you, or anyone, knows how to get great bass on it, then I would love to know how myself. (:
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