Like that first guy said with the intro, My suggestion would be to cut it completely or, if you want to keep it slow and moody, make it a little more artistic. The rest was great, creative and funky, and makes you picture an anime racing game.
A song I made a while back. Not in any particular album, but it was made solely by yours truly.
EDIT: OH hey! It actually worked! Well, there's what you wanted ^^
Like that first guy said with the intro, My suggestion would be to cut it completely or, if you want to keep it slow and moody, make it a little more artistic. The rest was great, creative and funky, and makes you picture an anime racing game.
while the begining was a tad slow for my tastes everything else was made with perfection. this is strictly my opinion and everyone is entitled to their individual ones. the song is masterfully made and i hope to see more made by you
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.