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UPDATE: I have uploaded a newer version of the song.
This is a work in progress.
This is a very short clip, about 30 seconds.
Guitar, Piano, Orchestra collaboration...hopefully it turns out well enough. Live instruments and VST's are being used at the moment.
Would really love artists to help with collaboration. Since my skills are very limited.
Its always tunes like this i like they bring something differant and special to the portal, and you did a pretty decent job with this one, made it pretty entertaining for all, now ofcourse there could be some improvments but thats with every tune that comes thru the portal. I really like the acoustic in this that was something differant and unique, And the piano was another nice touch aswell, I also liked the sound of the flute in this piece
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So with this one its hard to suggest any improvments, as this was pretty good and solid all the way thru, i guess it could be longer.
Good sounding, but...
I was a little disappointed to hear the sounds of the piano "topping out" and giving static over the top of the track, as it's just a little too loud. More work on the balance would help this, but I've listened to the track in spite of that issue, which still leaves a very enjoyable track to listen to.
The guitar is nice and well balanced, which compliments the piano nicely. Given the additional work with the strings toward the end, you have left the piece well poised to progress further and then it stops. I felt that was a shame, since the setup is there for a fantastic sounding work, that can truly set the mind racing. Take it forward from these beginnings and give us a few more indications of where you can take this, I'm sure it'll sound great. Keep working at it, this sounds positive.
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Thank you for the feedback! Yes I will admit my mixing and balancing skills are, not what they should be. I am improving as I go I suppose. :3
A very nice blend of each instrument. The acoustic guitar beginning the song is always a nice touch, and it built up nicely. The piano and acoustic guitar playing together is beautifully done and the orchestra gives off an elegant, vivid vibe.
The entire song progresses steadily, as a nice, calm tune, joined in by the piano and eventually by the orchestra.
A very nice audio submission overall. In fact, I'll be using this in my big animation project as it fits the scene perfectly! I'll be sure to give you an Audio Portal credit :)
Thank You for the feedback! Hope to see some good animations. :)
This song turned out to be an excellent combination and the acoustic guitar starting things off was a really nice touch. Slowly the piano joins in on the rhythm and they play together as if they were the best of friends and trying to create a new song for the world to enjoy from them. Very beautiful song. This is an awesome combination!!
The acoustic guitar gives that feel like someone actually cares about what happens in your life and that you aren't always alone as the other person joins in on the piano and helps to collaborate on the piece making it all the more cheery.
The orchestra paints vivid imagery The flute was nice to hear on the ears as if slowly lulling you off to sleep for a moment.
Overall, very nice song, I enjoyed it a lot!
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Sorry it took me so long to get back on these review, thank you and I'm glad I was able to portray vividness :)
Wow! Just wow... A good, calm build up. Closing your eyes, listen and imagine a colorful world or whatever you're feeling by this song. Amazing job!
Thank You for the feedback!!
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