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I hope you guys enjoy listening to it as much as I enjoyed composing it.
Comments are very welcome.
Please don't use this without asking. As long as you ask for it, I'll be probably fine with it.
Love the song man! Puts me in the relaxing mood that I wanted to be in!
I'm jealous of how the song is put together! Great vibe! Keep on going man!
Very nice song, although drums sounds too "robotish" and unrealistic (i would recomend better VST). Otherwise i really like sound of guitars and whole composition, i could really feel emotion from it, what is most important for me, so keep it up ! :)
This is a pretty good song. Aside from the fact that it is quite dull and very repetitive. I feel like the song could have been improved if you didn't drag out the same riff for such a long time with the only deviation being that instruments change slightly or get added in.
My suggestion would be for you to shorten the length of your instruments, like instead of having the same instrument going for 16 bars shorten it to 8 to make the song more enjoyable for the listener. I would also suggest having the instruments change at the same time, like having two instruments completely switch what they're playing while one stays the same instead of two instruments playing the same thing over and over while the drums change their beats slightly.
great song though, reminds me of a techno version of Godspeed you! Black emperor.
A place where broken dreams and delusions unite and reflect their darkness upon the coward's heart. Under a blackened, clouded sky... It is about to rain, and the wind sings its lament. Suddenly, a thunder strikes the wasteland, whitening the whole sky for an instant. It is the beginning...
Thanks, this is an awesome idea for some sort of video clip or something :)
Thank you for your review!
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