not enough happens in this song. its too plain and boring. house doesnt have to have to lack the different moving parts that music needs

Needs a bit more to it--it seemed a tad repetitive at points (I guess I shouldn't expect much variety from this style of music, but I'm sure you understand what I mean).

I picture this as some sort of introductory track to a game, or maybe something you'd hear in the lobby of some sort of club while you're waiting in line.

It's not perfect but it does the trick and I enjoyed it :)