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Rated 2.93 / 5 stars
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Conforming your ideals,
Your mind peels,
Time heals,
No wounds stuck in a mine field,
With no shield
-Or even armor to be addressed,
This contest in null, money is all mine to acquiesce,
I ask myself daily who the hell are these sub par lyricists,
Stepping to me like they won't end up FUBAR pugilists,
My teeth contain ruthlessness, To leave emcees lachrymose,
Y'all emcees remain a toothless mess, Being burned in the tracks of Helios,
And i'm a scary ghost,
-Or at least a divine amalgamation of your regret,
The very personification of an overlooked threat,
My eyesight shows me nothing but hopeless trash,
That could not be saved by the visit of Christmas past,
A bunch of apes who moan off syllables without reason,
I feel ashamed to even be compared to you creatons,
Most don't comprehend how much I am of a super,
I'm an everlasting perfect Cell to your Garlic Junior,
Fucking loser,- Your parents regard you as a tumor,
Feeding off their wealth oozing puss from the blister,
Spend more time on your lame punch line filler,
No wonder your parents are trying to get me to go out with your sister.



Rated 4 / 5 stars

Good but I think your lyrics are bullshit. Its like your got all these cool words but think about what you are saying:

My teeth contain ruthlessness, To leave emcees lachrymose,
Y'all emcees remain a toothless mess, Being burned in the tracks of Helios,
And i'm a scary ghost,

Your teeth are ruthless and leave mcs sad,
mcs are toothless messes, burned by the greek sun god
I am a ghost.

Also not all mcs are as shitty as they appear, usually anyone whose doing 'art' is an inherently lazy person. Just because someone isn't shading between the lines doesn't mean they can't or are unable.

Anyway on that note I can't tell if your backmasking your voice and such for a reason other than that because theres something wrong with it in real life that you feel you need to hide your identity or some shit but imo just maybe amplify/normalize/add-fast-attack +db to it and maybe not try to distort but just focus on keeping it clear and understandable. But the first part had no static so I don't think its the mic. So assuming this is hip hop we're talking about it than I would just work on keeping the vocals clear.

Its like your wrote it with this in mind:



Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

This is better then the hype track, but the vocs need some severe amping. The flow is very consistent and other then a few minor slips it was pretty well on beat. Thank you for not writing backwards :D


Rated 4 / 5 stars

Decent lyrics, but you sound like Stephen Hawking.

Sc0rChP0KnEe responds:

Better than sounding like he can't rap.