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Feb 26, 2012 | 11:15 AM EST
File Info
3.4 MB
3 min 46 sec
4.27 / 5.00

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Rated 4.27 / 5 stars
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Voice Acting - Comedy

Author Comments

HI GUIZE. I've finally submitted something! Yay!

The lack of music and SFX probably cripples this severely; I really hope it doesn't.

ANYWAYS; this here recording is my entry for the contest! It tells us the story of a town and a robbery committed in that town. It is also a story about a boy's quest for acceptance in a ruffian-filled world of prejudice. Be moved to tears. Be awed by it. Give it a 5/5!

Or not. Who am I to tell you what to do?


Time: 3 Minutes, 46 Seconds
Music: 0
SFX: 0
Microphone: Internal Macintosh Mic (I know, I'm a douche.)
Editing Software: Audacity
Percentage of Ad Libbed Material: Approx. 80%
Concretely Planned Material: "Once upon a time..."
Voices Included:

"China" Guy
Robber A
Robber B
Most Important Passerby
Manly Voiced Lady
Freakishly Strong Strength Scotsman
High Pitched (and unintentional) Solid Snake
Old Guy

Good Points There: One
Strength: Freakishly Strong
Superheroes in Chinatown: I don't think they've ever had a superhero before the boy hero.
Ruffians Taking That: 2



Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

"Take That Ruffians!" by KeepYourDistance
Acting: 26/50
Range: 20/25
Fit: 21/25
Mixing: 14/20
Originality: 15/15
Writing: 9/15 n/473344
TOTAL: 105/150
Additional Comments: There is background hiss.the narrator would have been better if you could have made him more snooty. goofier and more enthusastic acting would have been great for the villains. I would have worked on your script more instead of ad libbing. Is created odd pauses and took away from the script overall. If this is your first time, it's not too bad. Keep working on the critques and I think you'll do very well in the future. I have to say my favorite voice is the gilbert godfrey villager. Work on your strong voices then start creating different ones!

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KeepYourDistance responds:

Thanks for the constructive criticism!