could be a lot longer and it would have been great

hope this is not.. serious or whatever.. lol
and i also hope this isnt ur voice in the beginning and middle somewhereish..
that would be even more... whateverish o_O lol
consider this as a fucking bad review alright.
bc thats what it is. :D

The beat that starts at 12th second is good! More beats and better transitions would help to make this song a lot better!