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This is a song I wrote on a bad day. It made me feel better.
Please let me know what you think, and thanks for listening.
\m/ ^_^ \m/
I love the harmonica, guitar, lyrics and vocals, very uplifting. You lose major points for the crappy random beatboxing that didn't fit in there at all haha A shame cause I'd fall in love with this soulful song.
lol dj spire isn't very bright - it is indeed a harmonica - and it';s a very underappreciated and underused instrument - I love any song that uses one :P
and damn you for making this country hahaha..
this is a great song though for the genre - thus I can't really complain.. except for that sorry excuse for beatboxing you randomly added which kinda ruins the feel of the song,, seriously.. what's up with that? It wasn't needed at all :/
the rest is golden though - 9/10!
I really appreciate the review, thanks a million.
Yeah, I wasn't too sure about the beatboxing myself, but I went with it anyway. :/
I can't thank you enough for the awesome score, man, thanks!
The instrument at the very beginning seems a bit screechy, not really super pleasant to the ear. Sounds like either an accordion or a harmonica, I think it could use just a bit of high end reduction via EQ. Sounds like the typical I-IV-V-I chord progression at the beginning, which is pretty catchy. The vocals are a bit undersung, like more body voice than head voice. The random beatboxing in the middle could have been better done as an actual drum track. It didn't sound like it belonged.
9/10 for continuity
7/10 for composition
9/10 for vocals; lyrics made me chuckle
7/10 for catchiness
Overall it wasn't really catchy, but neither was it boring. I think that slightly different production would have upped the score a teensy bit, and it wasn't until the third time I heard it that I caught "boobies" whispered at the end.
-NAC Judge, [mod15]
Thanks man, I appreciate the helpful criticism.
Balls to you, good sir/madam!
This is quite awesome! love the lyrics funny as it's in the love NAC. Best of luck to you.
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