John and Larry
Credits & Info
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Author Numb3rL0ck
- Date
- 02/10/2012
- File Info
- Voice
- 2.4 MB
- 2 min 37 sec
- Score
- 3.57 / 5.00
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- Score:
- Rated 3.57 / 5 stars
- Plays & Downloads:
- 775 Plays | 22 Downloads
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- Genres:
- Spoken Word
- this
- i
- am
- tagging
Author Comments
I wrote a short skit then voiced it for the Ng Voice Acting Contest 8! Its about two friends named John and Larry. http://www.newgrounds.com /bbs/topic/1292474
UPDATE 2-26-12
I redid the whole thing using my new microphone. So hopefully it will sound better.
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Reviews
Rated 2 / 5 stars March 29, 2012
"John And Larry" by Numb3rL0ck
Acting: 31/50
Range: 7/25
Fit: 12/25
Mixing: 14/20
Originality: 14/15
Writing: 13/15
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/470335
TOTAL: 91/150
Additional Comments: The beat-boxing was a bit distracting. all of your characters sounded very similar. I would also like to hear more enthusiasm and emotion. The narrator was a cool idea, but you need to have more diction- it was a bit mumbly at times. Honestly, the last ranomd thing you threw in was the best part because it was natural and you kind of let go. During the actual skit, you seemed self-concious and maybe were trying too hard. I think you can definitely be better. You just gotta loosen up!
Rated 3.5 / 5 stars February 27, 2012
This skit was really funny man! I loved the the narration and the part where the robber came in "all you people need to get on the gound. This is a robbery. The man shouted."
My only critique is at some points I found it hard to separate the character's voices, but in the end that probably just added to the comedy.
Thanks man. I didn't realize that some of the voices sounded similar till after I had it recorded. But I was hoping someone might enjoy it anyways.