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Made with Logic Pro on a Macbook Pro. No analog instruments except for my voice.
I remember the days you and I just fell apart
You were holding my hand, holding my hand, singing along
But who are you to sway from my embrace?
So yeah, you were right
Two wrongs don't make a right
But I'm hoping you'll see
What it all did to me
So come on
Listen to me
I remember the time you and I just saw it pass
We were watching the flood, watching the flood, swallow our feet
But who are you to say I've been disgraced?
agree with Vamp, lyrics are too sporadic, have you ever heard linkin' park
if i were you i would re-upload this song with lyrics more like theirs, rap like, (no, please don;t think of me like that), but still in tempo
Loved the music...
However your vocals were a bit too rushed... For the tempo of the song they were too sporadic. Don't get me wrong, I loved the lyrics, very heartfelt. I'd saykeep an even tempo for the lyrics, but I absolutely loved the rest.
Thank you for your constructive criticism. Appreciate it
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