Great stuff!
I liked this one a lot and it's a great demonstration of your variety. It was funny how it sounded like it was more serious at first (maybe even a little dark) but it got a lot ligther and nicer as it went on. It's good talent to see a good transition not just in work over submissions, but in one submission. It does sound like a metally noisy punk thing, which I'm not a fan of, but you do it very well. There was obviously a lot of heart put into this as well as effort. You are truly an artist, Mr. Firth!