For starters, the Intro was great and some emotion was there; but the song itself is a tad bit repetitive. Up until 1:30 you had some nice beats going on, but from 1:30-1:45 you need to either add more to it or make it a bit more complex or different in some way. otherwise it takes away from the song both beat wise and its very anti-climactic as in it just sounds awkward compared to the rest of the song. It just feels like there isn't enough energy being released like the rest of the song.

However, this songs shows great promise and so do you good luck with future projects.
4/5 vote