Much better- I love the vitality and surge to your beat in this piece. Very get up and bounce, though the only nitpick to be had would have to be one of the tones used in what could be called your chorus. I dunno if its just me but its a really high pitched whine that hurts the hell outta my ears. My girlfriend says she cant hear it so I know it has to be some really high frequency sound gain or something.

Great!

The melody and the beat are great. I could really get into this.