Not too bad
Ok here is my advise and tips to this remix,
1. I can tell it was Fruity Loops used.
try to tweak and add chours effects same with reverb.
2. Levels are evil
Use a compressor on this on maybe about 3:1 ratio on a threshold of -6 that should prevent the distortion and clipping, making it sound clear, put that compressor on your main output channel (via your FX ) Play with it a bit.
3. You have a great idea here , some better samples and tweaking of the 3xOSC will make this mix awesome.
over all-
run all your synth's though seperate channels and slap on a bit of a reverb and or chours, change the oscillation on the 3x around to futher along the chours idea slap a compress on top of a Fruity fast Dist. to come out with a really wicked Hard trance Synth.
Boo Base was a good choice, get rid of the treble and you will have a clean base to your mix, here is an idea. half step the boobase, it will at a more rythmetic feel to the song making it a good club / dance song.
over all was awesome