Great flow

The song sounds great actually. You have great vocals too and the lyrics are pretty sweet actually. Sounds almost as if you were just able to make it all up as you go which is also pretty cool. Well done beat though.

The background tune is great here. The ambient feeling xylophone and other instrument are nice as the notes linger and make you feel alright. The drums are pretty tight since they have a nice little rhythm going there. I hear a bit of a bass too. Tight little beat.

The vocals are great! The lyrics are pretty nice and make you feel as if one should stop and observe the world around them and watch as it is always changing. Great vocal work though.

Overall, great song. Only bad thing is that there is almost twenty seconds of silence at the end. Aside from that, good work and vocals.

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It's good (:

You're a very good rapper but I think your singing is incredible too. I'd really like to hear you do a song singing like you are for the chorus.

Welcome back

Its about time you've come back. I still don't understand why you took down all your tracks.. In my opinion, a lot of them were better than this one, no offense.

I'll start with the good points. Just about everything was good, most of the lyrics were really great. Although some of them, were stuff I've heard before. Your flow, is amazing. Enough said. You have a great voice for rapping and a good singing voice as well. The beat was great. Nice choice in that one.

Now, with that being said, you could've made the voices at the beginning sound less... dumb... I wasn't sure how serious this track was until you hit the beat and started taking over.

Some of the lyrics through me for a loop. I'd hate to say this, but a few of them seemed to just be there because they rhymed. However, with THAT being said, most of them did fit nonetheless.

I love Hip-Hop, so I am inclined to judge this a lot harder than I would other pieces.

Also, I can really appreciate the message you had in this one, I actually felt it.

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Real dope man

phat flow, mixing, beat and all that jazz. Good stuff sir, keep on making moves!

Youre quite unique

Like that flow dude. You got style and you accompany the track very well. The breakdown killed it man. Im faving it. Great work.