I'm impressed! What plugin did you use? If you are new to Fruity Loops, then I imagine you are using Sytrus a good deal. The whole intro sounded Sytrusy to me. I've used it a lot, and you did very well using it! Though, you should try moving away from the presets, if these are in fact presets.
Nice work! lol, FL guitars aren't easy to use, but you did pretty well with them. :D
Keep on working at it!

Don't worry you will get better and better by making new stuff, just don't stop! you can download more advanced sound packs, better kicks claps and stuff and add more effects on them to make them sound beautiful, this is a good song by the way you just keep practicing

Hi,
Great song you made!
If it's ok for you, I will use it for a movie or photoalbum I made.
No, not a tv movie but movies of abandoned sites.
You can find my movies on http://www.picksz.nl
Keep up the good work!

Not bad

What? This isn't bad at all. The beat is good ;) But the drumloop can be better!