Fly Away( By Myself )

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Nov 27, 2011 | 8:27 AM EST
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10.9 MB
7 min 56 sec
Score
3.87 / 5.00

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Rated 3.87 / 5 stars
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Genres:
Hip Hop, Rap, R&B - Hip Hop - Olskool
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Author Comments

ahhh man i been here for to long
coverd up feelins goddamn i been to strong
and along those long lines of desperation
hesitation only for preparation of a situations thats wrong.

i feel happy tho about my choices
its time to clear my head its crowded in there damn bruh it gets to boisterus
thats cool at times i like feeling of many thoughts
but it gets scarey when those those thoughts turn into to mini voices

and those voices start shouted out things i dont wanna hear
they remind of my wrongs and the things i dont wanna get near
they know my fears and they use them against me they say its so tempting
to end me the envy within me is ending cause i know success and happy ness is all im making clear

bustin through the dark shit and heaading tword the lightness
my fight ends with i wining im the victor and thats clearness

chorus
Fly away
fly away from love
cause theres nothing there for me anymore

idk
tell them all
I guess im gettin pissed cause i know that in the end
that imma look up and see that im out the by my self

V2
ahhh man i been here for two days
the happiest i think i ever been but dammit whos to say
whats the reason? whats the cause? whos the female? who got balls?
to speak up and say the real reason why im happy
its really cause i know that my life is on the right path see

i know i was headin down the path of degredation
and you acted without hesitation no prepartion
you just did the shit no foundation you just did the shit
well no look this i guess im fuckin glad that between us you caused segregation

we like some severd nation thatll never be cool
i fuckin forgave both parties but ill never be cool
cause ill never be fooled into beliving whats not true
and lookin like a dumbass when all comes thru

and not enough have i stressed the most important thing
if you got comunication goddamn you got a thing
well thats the reason this happened cause of the lack it
from the back of it looks like you shoulda listened to me

v3
ahhh man i been here for 4 years
man this shit happened but i aint cry no tears
i left with some fears but im over that
i fuckin left my past oh yes im over crakk

damn but please let me finish kanye
im sure to let the whole world know im strange
im mean strange i had to say it in a strange way
so strange mother fuckin people could understand me

yes i got over all swag definition
remember this shit im here to kill it and never will i want to leave it
i love this shit but dont stay this way and i hope that someday it only gets better
and then i would want to lock it dwn and hold life in a set position

so please remember one thing if not anything else that i say
please live ya life the right way jus kno there is a wrong way
and that means ya dead or in jail but just have fun and dont end up dead and in hell
you will be okay just dont go to far and head astray

Reviews


DrMDrM

Rated 2 / 5 stars

It has promise

I liked some of your lyrics. There were some nice rhymes not just at the end of the lines, but rhymes within lines which shows a real ability to create poetry. The only problem was your lyrics sometimes simply did not fit with the rhythm of the lines. Sometimes it was deliberately intentional, making the lyrics break with the pattern in order to draw attention to what you're saying. Other times it just didn't fit. It sounded like you were trying to cram too many syllables in.
Furthermore, the timing is off at some points. You slightly miss lines which need to come in a bit faster. It throws it off a bit.
Also, on the chorus, get someone who can sing. Whoever's rapping can rap pretty well, but they cannot sing. It just sounds like a bad evening at a karaoke bar.
It shows promise, don't get me wrong. Not really my cup of tea genre-wise. But it needs some work done to it.