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hi all :)
this song has some good harmonies to it and can be really catchy.
but enough talk, why dont you tell me what you think :)
feel like this isnt trancy..
its more a dancy type of music.
tho you get the 8, cz you finally hit my soul.
i felt warm from the inside so goodjob!
its Dream trance. its too bad they dont have that option.
thank you, but why the 8....?
New, but incomplete
You have more diversity in synths this time around, but as Painasaurus points out the mastering could've been pulled off better.
Don't fret though, its perfectly normal to upload a remastered version if you wanna give it a go.. Remastering doesn't mean "make it boring" as many of my other fav artists seem to believe, just adjust the sound levels and take it from there.
The 'siren' at 0:37-0:47 should've been higher pitched at the end imo, but I guess thats up to the artist ;)
All in all i liked the song but it was lacking in some departments.
Keep 'em coming, practice makes perfect :)
it would be better if you told me what needed mastering better..
the drums weren't very overpowering so don't filter them. This melody is also very catchy so good job with that...whats a counter melody? Anyway your song is really good so i give u A+. Keep making stuff. v=)
a good review keeps me going
I feel like the drums are a little overpowering in the beginning, you could filter them, do a low pass/high pass, w/e. It would bring out the melody a bit more. The synths are fun, and upbeat, though a little flat, they feel like one texture rather multifaceted and interesting. Same with the bass, it's very simple. However, I'd like to praise you highly for your melody, it's really good, though the counter-melody could use a little work, it doesn't fit very well at certain parts, too slow, it detracts from the energy of the song. I like the counter melody seperately, it sounds great, but when it's played under the melody it just drags it. Make it a little more upbeat when you play it under the melody and I think it'll be great. This song has a ton of potential, great melodies, good breaks, the drums are good and stay interesting which is unusual for the genre. I really like the piece, it just needs some work on the synths and the counter-melody should be more upbeat when it's countering the melody.
thanks for the in depth review.
appreciated but disappointing at the same time. :/
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