I'm surprised no one has bothered to review/rate this.
I don't speak the language, so I don't understand the lyrics. However, I will say that the hook sounded nice.
Also, I'm not sure if you guys rapping was just a one-time thing, for a project (and you weren't gonna do it again). If it's a one-time thing, I don't think you guys care for tips on how to improve, but the delivery for just about everybody rapping could be improved. However, that guy at 1:54-2:14 had -very- good flow. One of the reasons I repeat this song is to hear his verse (does he also perform the hook? Sounds like his voice). With a bit more practice, I could imagine him being a pretty good rapper.
Overall, a solid effort. Not sure you guys even visit Newgrounds anymore, so you might not even read this, but I'd be interested in hearing more.