it became too generic
parts of the song was good but you took so long to get too it and with the beat being near the end with a change in sound it becomes generic and almost like your let the program create the music rather than you actualy puting the music together. my advice would be to take the middle section and put it too the beat and break it up with the sound from start and pick it up as it goes along to highten the energy. The sounds is there you just need to better control them.