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Nov 20, 2011 | 2:03 PM EST
File Info
1.9 MB
1 min 38 sec
2.68 / 5.00

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Rated 2.68 / 5 stars
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345 Plays | 22 Downloads
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Electronic - Techno

Author Comments

My first real song I've ever made. Sure I've made melodies before, but never a full song \o/ Though there's room for improvement, and I'd love to find out how to make it better, so don't hesitate to critique it for me!



Rated 3.5 / 5 stars


I think it's all too flowing. Nothing really changes with any of the instruments and the unpredictability of the melody weaves everything together so much that it's boring. Though I do like that bouncy mystery to the unpredictable melody. It just needs to change up more, with the beat, with the melody, or perhaps save a synth to be added in later. There are some really simple changes that can be made that can easily fool ears into thinking some huge dynamic has spun in a different direction. You've got flow, you just need to take it even further. :)

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deidaraart5 responds:

Hey, thanks so much for the crit!
I'll try and mess around with it some more to fix it up (Still new at this whole music making thing, haha. And I hardly know how to effectively use FL studio yet as well)
Do you have any tips on how to fix it up? (Just send a note if you do, obviously)