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New song i made, pretty heavy for my doing.
Its actually an old song but replayed with new sounds and with vocals.
The lyrics :
We will pay
We will feel revenge
This will end soon
they will destroy our mind
We will come face to face
With our makers
The end of the line
Sky will be
Red of anger
We are lost
Crying out loud
Is not enough for us
Hope you dig it !
The guitar riff that kicks in around 00.50... very catchy, couldn't've fitted more between those 2 other riffs ^^
excellent song writing, do not stop writing music!
Thanks dude ! dont worry i wont stop ;)
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. . . Absolutely amazing. How are you not signed on with a Record Label?
Deep in to the riff
The start kind of weirds you out a bit as you don't know what the sound is too much. Then the whispering vocals over the heavy riff at the start doesn't go to well with me. Almost feels like he was whispering to me. Could be fixed a bit.
Then later the guitar sounds really clear and very crisp to me while interweaving between light and sort of heavy then heavy making it sound really nice in that area. The bass here sounds really clear as usual and great. Probably the best part of the song to me was the drum beat you had going since it feels like a lot of soul was put into it.
The vocal are hard to hear at times though. Mostly just when the guitar is louder than the vocals at the start is all.
Overall, another great metal song.
thanks for the review man ! One thing tho the whispering, he is kinda whispering to you :P
Thanks again !
Great song, to start I think it took a bit too long for the song to "Kick in" as much as I like the calm start and the cool bassline it lasted a bit too long, regardless when it does finally kick in it sounds awesome, as usual the guitar riffs and the sound is badass. Near the end the drum seems a bit too loud. Anyway I love the heavy riffs and the rather unique style of singing. Excellent work and keep it up !
Sry for the short review :S
Well ... let's see what I have to say about this one ...
I really don't like the start to be honest. I understand the idea is to give an effect to the music, like a slow start into the heavies (maybe?) but the tone of the battery is definitely bad, it's too high. Then you go with some whispered voices (that would be impossible to understand if you hadn't write the lyrics down) proceeding then with an(other) effect that blasts into some really heavy riffs at 0:46 (in fact, one of the heaviest you've ever done). After this initiation you go on with the duality of voices that is, IMO, your main attribute and mark, and that always ends up adding a unique touch to your work - in a good manner ofc :D
There is not much to say here (well, tbh there is, but I just don't have the time to write a long-assed review as I usually do xD ) until 2:21 where you start with a guitar solo. I am not sure what to call this dissonant/new age melody (new age? I never thought I would ever use this term here, but this word just jumps into my mind when I hear your solo. Good job :P ) and I am not even sure how to classify it to be honest ... still, it fills into the mood and you make a very good transition to the voice theme again at 2:45 (nice blast in!). After that I only want to notice that I really feel that the drums after 3:09 are kinda forced, and you really jump into the end, I was expecting something slower, maybe with the voices, or even a conclusion for the riffs from 0:45.
I do have to ask something though: what's with all the death and melancholic lyrics? Jesus, every metal song I hear always has some lyrics talking about pain and negativism and stuff like that ... I truly wonder why no one ever makes metal song about being badass or something like that :P I guess this is why I like my power metal and my guitar instrumentals better than anything else.
Anyway, IMO, the beginning really has some weird effects and the end looks quite rushed. However, on the bright side, you compensate with some of the heaviest riffs I've heard from you and you explore the duality of voices very nicely.
Score, for the reasons stated above:
This could use some improvement in deed, but since I am a fan I decided to vote 5/5 for visibility matters (the longer you stay at the top, the more reviews you'll probably get [probably!]). I do give this an 8/10 because I think you've done better with other pieces. Don't be bad though, experimenting new stuff is always good as long as you learn new lessons. Who knows where this new path will take you? Maybe my next score will be 11/10 :p
Man i love your reviews, really aprecciate it, and your really helping me ... thats awesome. As for this song it was indeed sort of an experiment, soundwise and riffwise.
Thanks a bunch man, your advise will be used.
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