Wo xiquan!
Haode!! Wo ai mei nu!
Asian girls make the world worth living in. You got nice relaxed tone with your style and real clever lyrics. I'd say you could work on keeping your energy/presence concentrated, you start this track out sounding like you're have fun, but by about the half point, it sounds a sounding a bit dull, which in turn makes your words sounds a bit dull. It also sounds like theres a nasty reverb on your vocals, which makes it difficult to understand. Keep at it bro.
-Mao