not bad, just needs some adjustments

First off, this song isn't bad, but in my opinion it lacks the variation that House depends upon, there is a lot of repetition of the same sounds that becomes less and less pleasant to listen to.

I've noticed a lot of people who make House fall into the trap of using the Chords of Life patch without really adding anything to it themselves. By no means am I saying this patch shouldn't be used, I use it ALL the time, it's great after all! But maybe only if used sparingly and subtly.

The intro doesn't really draw the listener into the song. A basic kick drum for a few bars doesn't really make the listener want to hear more. I find ambient sounds work well for intros, little fills and sounds that draw you deep into the song.

Anyway, this has some things to be fixed, but it's coming along and you will definitely get better. Good work!