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Chill tune to veg on. Hope you like it.
Weird timing at the start, the slightly off beats and syncopated rhythm catch my interest along with the chromatic tune than starts at 0:27. The sound that is neither percussion nor piano at the start but is a sort of "ooam" noise is cool, and made me think of water and subterranean settings. The piece is a little repetitive though and i think a slower start would have helped keep me engaged and would have been more suited to the title. All in all the piece creates an interesting atmosphere and mood but fails to really go anywhere and could have just been a 1m loop.
What's with the title?
The piano sounds a bit off. Are these recordings or is it on the piano roll. Maybe adjusting the attack(longer) would do the trick.
The drums are sort of boring, add another element like hi hats on the second iteration of the main melody. Strings would be a great addition as well.
It's sorta weird, like there is a hip hop beat but there is nothing else hip hop about it. Maybe it's just the drum kit.
Needs more layers!
everything is the way it should be. lol
the title speaks for itself.
ps. its music, enjoy it for what it is and don't try to make it something it's not.
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