Nice beat and techno, but the metal could use some work.
I like the beginning techno part, but the metal is a little to fast to work with the rest, if you used the intro as the basis for a song i would love it, or if you had slowed down the metal and added some techno to smooth the transition it would be awesome. i also like how the outro works.
intro: 9/10
outro: 9/10
middle: 6.5/10
style: 8/10
Love your music
-Matrixmage