hmmm

well right off the bat it comes to me as a very soft song - and trance usually means 2 put u in a trace, but it's so soft, lol kinda like background music, it does sound nice, but i would recomend jazzin it up a bit... (-_-)

Nice use of percussion, but it could use some more

I like your hihats, they got nice subtle variation. Your kick is nice and punchy, your snare sounds crisp.
Your could add a lot of things to this song though. Try to give it more structure.
Give it a nice intro, some pads behind the piano, then you can build it up with a sweep up, towards the chorus. You could also give it a nice submelody to improve the atmosphere.
Then you could add a lot of nice things in the chorus. Try messing around with some nice synth lead melodies, a simple offbeat bass and and offbeat hihat. The solo's could really be nice in a mid section or breakdown. After that, you can go back to your chorus, perhaps add a little something extra, pads or arps and then after that you can build off in the outro.
I really like your melodies and solo's and your percussion is fine. Your song could just use some more structure and instrumentation.
Good job man, keep it up!