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Date
10/04/2011
File Info
Song
3.1 MB
3 min 26 sec
Score
3.95 / 5.00

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Rated 3.95 / 5 stars
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Author Comments

Hey, this one's been on the work bench for quite a bit now. I'm really not sure how to label this, genre wise.

Halloween 2011

Lyrics:
Desire upholding their fates
A spectacle at mass
Separate circles bleeding epitaphs of several persons
Gaping lens to feed off of
For me, it's not a game
There's something to it, something I was...
Broken people
Broken souls
Broken curses
A new ones birth

In my mind I've seen some, so disgusting
My mind's eye tastes them, as were idols

If you figure out what the song is about, you get a picture of a cookie that I'll make just for you. You even get to pick what kind.

Reviews


NekoMikaNekoMika

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Interesting

Start of this one kind of made me think of backmasking a bit for some reason or another I can't truly remember. The tune sounds like it would be slightly fitting for either desert levels or maybe a creepypasta reading as well making this tune feel pretty dark and strange to me.

The vocals are nice and deliver a clear yet creepy feeling message to me as well. Very strange feeling but they all sing together on key at least which is great.

The rumbling sound kind of makes me think of an airplane flying in circles. The drums and shaking sound I hear make me think that the tune is going to keep getting stranger. The synth sounds pretty nice and gives a feel of someone having their voice trapped somewhere.

The trumpets sound really nice too which is great. I like how for the rest of the song after singing that they are chanting to make it all feel so much more strange to me.

Overall, very well done and creepy feeling song.

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Rahmemhotep responds:

Awesome. Glad you like the song.


DreamEaterDreamEater

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Interesting forsure

This song was different compared to most forsure, and I could see why you would have trouble giving it a proper genre.

The lyrics are really good, and I really enjoyed your sense of poetry. The song was named well, as most of the samples/ instruments in this song sounded pretty broken and distorted. Overall this was seriously an interesting submission; very experimental.

Things to take a second look at:
- Although the lyrics are good, the vocal elements of this song weren't so great.
- The lead instruments really clashed with that bass sample that you used; made things sound slightly grimy

Overall not bad work. but could use some polishing up
~Sonik

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Rahmemhotep responds:

Grimey=a good thing in my book.

The vocals clash with the song because my mic sucks balls.