could be nice but....
a lot of things are offbeat here... you may want to work on it a tad more...
My last song? yes my last songs! Yeeeees!
could be nice but....
a lot of things are offbeat here... you may want to work on it a tad more...
okay thanks for your review
=D
maybe I will work on it more...
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