Simple beat... but potential.

The beat is simple. But sometimes that's what makes it better. The synth that comes in at 20 seconds should be replaced with a bell or ambient sound. The sound you use there is more of a techno sound that doesn't really blend in with the song as well as the pad you use. Also, you should probably have it build up and then have a "break" in the middle of the song somewhere. At that break you can repeat the song, or have a different, yet similar rhythm as the start. Not sure if this helps, but it's something. :) Nice work on it though!