great but wheres the beat drop :[

cool

Well played.

The others are right when they said that the mastering isn't perfect but I say that is pretty dang awesome. You did great.

The only part that I can truly say that I'm not satisfied with is the lazer burst sounds at 0:29. Those just kinda stuck out and seemed out of place.
Otherwise well done!!

Remember, keep the bass low.
TheBodasity

Definitely my favorite from you.

make more like this please. The build up, the drop, the synths, everything is just perfect. Mastering and mixing your song will come once you start making more music (and maybe a little better computer wouldn't hurt) :P but honestly, for only making music for what like 3-4 months, this is just crazy, i wouldve cried if i made this song 3-4 months into making music. Never stop alright? your too good already :P Great job man. Im awaiting your next song :P
~Jason

Catchy....

This song definately has potential, I can definately tell it's been made in FL Studio :p because I use it all the time, I recommend this should be a bit faster as it's a slow-paced song, the kick should be more punchy as someone has stated below, I think you should give the crash a lil reverb, the wobble bass I would recommend you equalise the bass on it so it stands out more, when there is no bass the whole song just goes a tad louder so if you master the whole song by just making all instruments slightly lower on volume when the bass is not on it would be great!

Overall 9/10
5/5