Good stuff.
I liked the feeling you present with this song, it has a damn neat melody.
I don't know if panning the sound so drastically was a good idea, I feel that makes it a tad distracting.
Good use of the flanger.
I rather like this song, a fair deal >_<! I'm a classical composer myself, so I place all my focus on melody and overall feel, and this song has both of these in good amounts.
5/5 from me Effervescent, keep them coming.