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A song that gathered inspiration from a negative point in a friends life.
This song reminds me of Nirvana. Good job!
Thanks, man. :]
So coming back to the portal for the first time in months, and this is the first song I come across. This is a great song to come back to. The parts that only bothered me was at 1:10 to 1:23 and again later on in the song, not a major thing, but it's just a tiny detail that could be worked on to have the vocals and guitar sound good together as well as tweeking the vocals to be a tad louder than the guitar. That doesn't take away the fact the lyrics are well written and the guitars / bass well preformed. Over all I really enjoyed listening to this. Keep up the great work guys!
Thanks for the great review, man. We plan on releasing a few more songs sometime soon. I agree about the vocals needing tweaking.
Despite giving me a sh1tty review on my song, that had absolutely nothing to do with the song it self, I will give you an actual review.
The voice needs a compresser to even out some of the weird shifts in volume. The guitars and bass are way louder over the vocals. But the melody and overall song construction is ace, nice job.
I assume the first part about the shitty review was because of my band mate. lolz. But about the song, I agree 100% about the voice needing compression. Also, I see a little bit of what you are saying about guitar and bass being louder than the vocals. Thanks for the review, and the next song coming here in a few weeks should be better.
Great song, its music like this that makes it worth just checking rnadom songs on the audio portal. :D Cheers
Thank you sir.
This could have brrn an awsome Grunge song! The only thing i didnt like was the thing at 1:08. I thougt that the distortion would come in there and melt my brain but... well it didnt. Everything else was really good!
We plan on revising it sometime.
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